thank you for your hard work but i have a Simple criticism, that there is many chapters have a pages don't belong to it, it make me confused when i read it. please fix it if you can.
This manga make so many lacked scenes (they cut so many scenes and didn't explain what happened with this or that), it is hard for reader to understand the event of the story. Why are you making this kind of not wanting the reader to enjoy the story. You should learn from some stories like "Tales of Demons and Gods or something ". It would be the best for reader to understand the plot of the story. They even explained a lot of thing from the get go. If you make this manhua like you write the light novel, it will be perfect. In my point of view I didn't enjoy this story much and it make me so boring some time to get where the story from and continue. I hope u should improve. To my dear author of this story.
please fix it if you can.